I am sharing this because I worked really hard on this piece of writing. I use very detailed words to make a it sound better.
WALT: communicate our ideas
Text Type: Recount
Purpose: inform the reader
- Structure - introduction (what, who, where, when) / middle (events & details) / conclusion
- Use different sentence starters (words to begin your sentences)
- In order of time
- Your best spelling and punctuation
The river walk
Suddenly I scream a small eel wraps around my ankle, but it’s not a eel, it’s twisty stick. I swim into the deep water, but then the current changes and it goes shallow my knees scrape against the sharp rocks, like birisels in a car wash. My eyes widen wider and wider I gaze at the tree Sweet pea the dog is climbing it I rub my eyes for a moment, then glare at the tree again in amazement. A Jack Russell is climbing a tree. I wonder if my sister's dogs can do that?